Sample Paper Response

I liked the second essay better. It gave more of a thorough explanation to the points they were trying to make. If you haven't read the book yet, it gives you enough information to understand what is going on in the book and what is happening to this Indian character. It gives good evidence and analysis but does not pull any quotes out of the book as a source of evidence. However, there were some problems with the essay. I think the thesis could have been more detailed. Also, the essay skips some important scenes like when Arnold first goes to Reardan and ends up punching Robert in the face. The essay didn't talked about the relationship that he gained with Gordy. Also when he meets Penelope and the type of relationship they gained.